Messaging

American Express. Capital One. ING Direct. Nordstrom. T-Mobile. USAA. These are just a few of the amazing, customer-first voices I have had the privilege to work with … crafting messaging that engages, involves, compels and persuades. So what is the secret to “good copy” you may ask? Actually, it’s pretty simple.

No matter what you are saying – tweet, email, banner, letter – never forget that you are writing to satisfy the needs of the reader not for yourself.

Readers, I have come to learn by speaking with as many of them as possible, have fairly universal needs. When engaging with any marketing message, they are primarily interested in getting the answers to the Big Three Questions:

What is it?
How does it makes my life better?
How do I get it?

Great messaging always answers these three questions. Marketing messages that miss the mark usually either a) don’t answer all three or b) spend so much time with one of the answers that the reader never gets to the others.

Speaking of threes, the messaging I create on your behalf quickly moves the reader through

The Three-Stage Rocket Model of Effective Messaging™

Stage 1 – Awareness

Stage 2 – Action

Stage 3 – Advocacy

If your current messaging is not driving Awareness, Action and Advocacy, contact me and I will provide recommendations on how to make your messaging more effective and responsive.

Case Studies

AdWatch: Apple, Maya Angelou and The Human Family

AdWatch: Apple, Maya Angelou and The Human Family

What do you say when you are a global brand? What do you say when your products are practically ubiquitous … shorthand for an entire class of technology? What do you’ve when your champions and critics have said nearly everything that could be said? You let a poet speak. You let a poet speak not…+

Did the recent Super Bowl commercials signal the beginning of the end?

Did the recent Super Bowl commercials signal the beginning of the end?

Unlike the many pundits who’ve offered their opinions on what were the best and worst Super Bowl spots, we’re going to focus instead on an unmistakable trend that was highlighted by a number of the spots. Sure, this is something that has been out there for a while, but the accumulation of how often it…+

From the Blog

Reviewing the Ads: Microsoft Surface “Mac Book”

Humor has its place in advertising. It’s a good tactic for breaking through the clutter; getting people to see your brand as human and relatable; and, of course, getting people to enjoy your ad enough to pay attention. But humor is probably the hardest thing to get right. Case in point: The newest spot for…+

Cowardly …

Cowardly …

If you live in the South, you may be familiar with the Food Lion supermarket chain. Food Lion is the kind of supermarket you go to because … well, because it’s the closest, I guess? Well, as many re-marketers do from time to time, seems the folks at Food Lion decided they needed a brand…+

4 things you can do RIGHT NOW to improve your creative process

4 things you can do RIGHT NOW to improve your creative process

If I had a time machine and could go back to visit the younger me, I believe he would be bewildered and dismayed by my later-in-life embrace of process. He’d rail at me at how creative people – you know, the really creative people – won’t let themselves be restrained by a set process. He’d…+